Zestful Blog Post #217
Before the magic happens, a couple of bits of business. I
promised last week to reveal the name of the restaurant in the photo if nobody guessed. Not like
it’s some super amazing thing, but it’s the 13 Coins next to the Seattle-Tacoma
airport. It’s Marcia’s and my favorite place to eat when we stay near that
airport, in spite of the slight hokiness of the coins being embedded in the
polymer coating on the tabletops. We love the midcentury-modern ambience, and
the food is good, although I watched the bartender water our Manhattans once. I
complained, but the server argued that that was impossible. I let it go, but
later saw the server whispering to the bartender, who avoided looking at us for
the rest of the time. Don’t let that stop you from going there, though; just
order wine or beer. Or coffee, if it’s breakfast time. We’re not degenerates
here.
If you are reading this blog between the dates of June 22
and June 26, 2017, I wish you would pop over to Amazon and snag a free Kindle
copy of I am Calico Jones. It’s
a collection of four short stories by yours truly, led off by the title
story, which is a personal account of an adventure by the very Calico Jones about
whom Lillian Byrd loves to read in the cheesy novels she gobbles up at every
opportunity. And wow, when I just tested that link, I see that it's at #4 in LGBT short reads, edging out the tons of erotica that make up most of that list. Go, literature.
Not long ago during a conversation with one of the few
private clients I work with on writing fiction, I gave an impromptu piece of
advice she found very helpful. She mentioned it in a comment a few weeks ago, and now I’m motivated to share it in this post today. (Thanks, Bev.)
It has to do with the revision process. Now, this can be during
chapter-by-chapter revisions as you go, or while you’re revising a manuscript
that is more or less complete.
[It wasn’t easy to come up with a
photo for this post. Can you find reverse in this image? It’s my car; the
plastic of the gearshift cover is delaminating, but it is 22 years old, so
gimme a break.]
The technique very simply is this: Write down a little
summary of each chapter. OK, that’s it. Now, most of us like to do at least a
little bit of outlining in advance of writing fiction, and that is a good thing.
But as we write, things don’t always go as planned, and that may be all very
fine too. But then what?
Writing a little summary of each chapter does several
things:
·
It helps you keep track of your threads of plot
and theme as you go, and it helps you distinguish the two.
·
It helps you spot problems that need fixing,
like plausibility gaps or plot gaps, or simply unfinished thoughts that require
further development. It also will help you spot redundancies or nonessential
material that should be cut.
·
If you listen to your gut as you review this
summary, you’ll also notice where and how your emotions are triggered, and then you can work to emphasize or deemphasize
appropriately.
·
It builds an accurate working outline. This
alone makes this tip worth his weight in gold, if you ask me. (How much does it
weigh? That’s the key question. I believe at least a pound. My mailing address? Just ask.)
·
This working outline will eventually become your
completed outline, which you will use when pitching your manuscript to agents
and/or publishers.
·
If you self publish, your outline or summary
will be helpful to you when writing promo and cover copy for your book.
When I practice this, I write my summaries on a yellow pad off to
the side as I’m working on the digital manuscript on my computer. Just a few
sentences are all you need.
Have you ever done this? If so, tell us how it works for
you. If not, and you decide to try it, ditto!
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